The process of science, Many great inventions have been born
and one of the in modern technology has been invention computer and computer
games. Computer games to provide numerous helpful benefits. They help us to
treat a variety of disorders and disabilities, to make us have fun and
entertainment, and serve a range of educational functions.
Some parents might think that watching TV is a better way to
spend your time to playing video games .But i think games are much more interesting
than TV. TV is a one way operation going from the TV to the viewer. Games have two
way operation, back and forth, where the viewer can change the world and story.
Games let people be creative and interact with their world whereas TV tells
people what to think.
In addition , Children are more exposed to video games
nowadays while they are still in school. There are several schools that make
use of the medium of video games in order to help the children to have better
knowledge and understanding of the subjects that they are being taught. In
fact, it is being considered as one of the most popular methods of teaching
nowadays simply because there are a few games that help the children to improve
their creativity and imagination..
Playing video games is now considered as a form of
physiotherapy and they are being recommended by the medical associations. Those
people who are trying to make a comeback after fighting with some major illness
or accident can actually experience a lot of improvements in their health if
they start by playing video games. Games help children are sick or injured
also. Absorb the pain and discomfort of the scattered mind in the game. Many
hospitals are to encourage children and others undergoing painful treatment and
play video games.
Conclusion, The world of gaming is constantly changing. Read
up on games and learn how to choose games that are beneficial. Know what your
child is doing at all times. Place your trust in your child but ensure that he
or she is able to gauge accurately right from wrong.
By,
Doreen Chang
Methodist Boys' School
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ReplyDeleteIn this generation, the world is full of the technology. Many products are produced by using technology in our daily life. For instance, video games. Nowadays, video games are taking the place of traditional games for children to play anytime and anywhere. Some of the people agree that playing video games is good for us but some of the people are disagree with this view. For me, I totally agree playing video games will bring many pros to us.
ReplyDeleteFirstly, the pro of playing video games is it can help us to relieve our stress. Recent studies by researchers at the Massachusetts General Hospital’s (MGH) Center for Mental Health and Media have shown that playing online games helps to relieve stress and tension from work. In this 21st century, most of us are facing stress in different aspect such as parents, works, friends and etc. These stress might cause us become melancholy and unhappily. Through playing video games, we can relieve our stress because all we need to do is shift our focus away from our work and change the direction of thinking towards fun thoughts and playing such as puzzles. When we are playing video games, some idea or intention will appear in our mind. With this, we will find that all the things that make us worry can easily be solved after the stress has relieved.
In addition, we can build communication skills and teamwork in our daily life. In video games, we need to communicate with other people so that we can access the games successfully. This is because most of the video games need cooperation of each other to complete the games. If one of the people who is in the same team with you is refuse to follow the instruction of leader, the games might not complete successfully but failed. So, you need to have good communication skills and the teamwork spirit when you are playing video games. This is very important to us not only in games but in our true life too. For example, icebreaker game.
Last but not least, another pro of playing video games is it can help you to learn the words and things that you cannot learn it from the school. Most of the people like to play video games is because it is fun, full of challenge and the plentiful reward after winning the games. When we are playing video games, we will find that there are some strange vocabulary and things in the games. As an example, The Sims. We need to understand and find out the meaning of it so that we can continue to play the game. The best way to learn is when the learner is having fun at the same time. That’s why video games can improve our knowledge.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides. Playing video games is good for us unless we are addict to it. We must know how to manage our time well so that playing video games will not bring cons for us in our life.