In
this technology advanced century, video games are common necessity for
youngster, even though adults also addicted to video games. It can be found
everywhere and anytime. Video games bring happiness and help the busy citizen
to release their pressure, however it can harm you in more than one way.
First
of all, playing video games causes people to neglecting their works, especially
the students. A study found that
students who had a video game player to distract them in college studied 40
minutes less and it translated to a first-semester drop of 0.241 points on a
4.0 scale. As the saying ‘time is gold’, this amount of time can be
wisely allocated to other beneficial activities such as exercising.
Besides
that, playing video games for a long period may causes us shuffle with health
problems for example obesity. This is because the potato couches who keep
sitting in front of the computer for hours. If they are playing a good video
game, the only time they get up is to use the bathroom and having meal. Thus, video
games can also cause people to lose sleep and become to an immobile when awake.
Furthermore,
video games also give rise to juvenile cases each year, which is one of the
main headache for almost every country. Video games that are broadcasted contain
a huge dose of violent, sexual and even crimes scenes which will easily pollute
the immature mind of a teenager. This will definitely lead to a huge increase
in robbery, kidnapping, raping, illegal racing and even killing. All these
juvenile casas surely is going to undermine the dignity or our country.
In
conclusion, I still strongly think that video games bring more cons than pros
if no self-discipline among the video games players.
written by,
Tan Lee Yin
(MBS)
Simple and straightforward essay. Your argumentative points are not well developed. You need to provide statistics and other evidences or examples to support your claims. It should not be just mere stating and take for granted that the readers are persuaded with your claims. Try writing a longer conclusion as the one written is too brief.
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