The
availability of video games has led to an epidemic of youth violence.
Researchers find that people serving time for violent crimes typically consume fewer
medium before committing their crimes than the average person in the general
population. Children practice over and over the
actions available in a game. Whatever a person practices repeatedly becomes an
automatic response. Violent games teach children how to behave like a criminal
and to intentionally hurt others.
Neuroscientific
studies show reduced cognitive brain functions in individuals exposed to
violent media. The greater the experience with violent media, the lowers was
the activation of brain areas for thinking, learning, reasoning and emotional
control. This may cause some of negative effects on children’s
brain development. For example, spending many
hours playing games some children will not develop their frontal lobes, which
play a crucial role in controlling behaviour and in developing memory, emotion and
learning.
Video
games can be addictive because they give immediate rewards for learning.
Teenagers with their adolescent brains are easily become addictions as their
brains are under development till the middle 20s. Recent brain research is
suggesting that any addictive behaviour can harm the final stages of brain
development in young adults, leaving them with a less than mature decision
making system and diminished empathy for others. These are just a few of the potential side effects of violent
videogame play.
In
the conclusion, as what I mentioned earlier playing video games are not good
for us. We can prove from the research which done by the professional.
Sometimes, playing video games can help to release tension and fill up our free
times. But once addicted on the games, it brings a lot of negative effect to
the players. Lastly, parents should pay attention on what games their children
are playing and also prevent them from addiction on the video games.
Written by
Yi Xian
Methodist Boys' School
You have started off your essay well by telling the readers what video games can affect the health and brain development of young generation as well as increase the rate of juvenile violent crimes and influence bad habits. However, you did not develop all these points in the body text. Remember, try to write your thesis statement in a sentence.
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